Monday, 6 May 2013

200 word cinematic


200 words:
In the evening the main character is cleaning an upstairs bedroom, as the player puffs the pillow a deep groan whaling sound followed by rattling chains dragging on concrete, as Ashley hears the chains the lights flicker.
·         crickets
·         slight creaky floor boards
·         pillow rustling
·         bed creaking
·         light flickering
Ashley opens the old bedroom door and turns on the first floor corridor lights, as Ashley steps out onto the landing a sound of a glass smashing to the ground echoes from downstairs, a dead silence follows as the sound of the winding blowing through cracks in the old building can be heard clearly.
·         Foot steps
·         Creaky floor boards
·         Wind
·         Glass breaking
·         Old hinges creaking
·         Ashley breathing
Ashley gulps down his/her fears and makes the long journey down the old Victorian staircase to the ground floor.
·         Old stairs
·         Footsteps
·         Gulping
·         Hand running down the hand rail
The rattling of chains becomes louder as he sees the trap door which was once hidden under a large red carpet, he bends down and grabs the old handle and pulls with all his/ her might, the trap door creeks open and rests open with a thud. (fades to black)

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