200 words:
In the evening the main character is cleaning an upstairs
bedroom, as the player puffs the pillow a deep groan whaling sound followed by
rattling chains dragging on concrete, as Ashley hears the chains the lights
flicker.
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crickets
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slight creaky floor boards
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pillow rustling
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bed creaking
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light flickering
Ashley opens the old bedroom door and turns on the first
floor corridor lights, as Ashley steps out onto the landing a sound of a glass
smashing to the ground echoes from downstairs, a dead silence follows as the
sound of the winding blowing through cracks in the old building can be heard
clearly.
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Foot steps
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Creaky floor boards
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Wind
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Glass breaking
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Old hinges creaking
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Ashley breathing
Ashley gulps down his/her fears
and makes the long journey down the old Victorian staircase to the ground
floor.
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Old stairs
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Footsteps
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Gulping
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Hand running down the hand rail
The rattling of chains becomes
louder as he sees the trap door which was once hidden under a large red carpet,
he bends down and grabs the old handle and pulls with all his/ her might, the
trap door creeks open and rests open with a thud. (fades to black)
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